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Finn is lying on the ground by the tree house staring at the sky. Winter has finally started to break, and the sun is out and very bright. It’s even pretty warm! As he watches a few clouds float by, Jake comes running up. He has a book in his hand and a big grin on his face. “Dude! Check out this book I got from the library! It talks about an old holiday, and Lady Rainicorn and I were following the blueprint.” Finn takes the book out of his hand and reads the title, ‘The Story of Valentine’s Day.’

Finn says, “So, what’s it all about?” Jake replies, “Back before the Mushroom War, people that loved and like-liked each other would make fancy cards for each other, give them to each other and then go make out.” Finn looks at Jake with a stern look. Jake blushes, and then gets a sheepish grin on his face and says, “Well, Lady Rainicorn and I made up the making out part…” Finn sighs and looks at the ground. “I can’t make out with Flame Princess without risking the end of the world. And besides, she’s off in the Fire Kingdom trying to make things right between her and her dad.” Jake says, “What about Princess Bubblegum?” Finn looks at Jake and says, “Bro, she kicked me in the heart twice. Fool me once, shame on you. Fool me twice, shame on me.” Finn has a tear form in his eye thinking about those times; first when she reagified, and then when they were launching her liquid fireworks on the roof of the tree house. No matter what his feelings were for her in the past, he just doesn’t have room in his heart to forgive her, at least not yet. They are still friends, but they will probably never go beyond that…

Then Jake starts naming off Princesses. Wild Berry, Breakfast, Mini, Hot Dog, and while he likes all of them, he really doesn’t feel like he like-likes any of them. Jake sees that his attempts to help are just making Finn sadder! While he mulls it over, he hears a voice behind them. “Hey der bub! I gots a message for yez!” Finn turns and sees Flambo. “What’s that Flambo?” Flambo replies, “Da princess wants me ta tell yez that she is gonna stay in da Fire Kingdom for a while. Her dad and her are making up, and she likes it theah!” Finn gets a frown on his face and sighs. “Thanks Flambo… I wish you had better news, but at least now I know…” He reaches into his pack and throws Flambo a charcoal briquette, and then sits down again. Flambo runs off towards the Fire Kingdom.

Finn rests his chin in his palms and stares at the ground. Then Jake has an idea! This will surely cheer up his bro! He says, “What about Marceline? She may even remember the holiday.” Finn rubs his chin. “Hmm, it’s true I like-like her, but will she kick me in the heart like Preebles did?” He sits there for a second and ponders where he is at in his life, and then stands up. “What kind of card do I make?” Jake says, “Make a cutesy card with hearts and gumdrops on it! That’s what was on most of the cards in the book. Most of them were really red.”

Finn starts walking towards the tree house. He goes in and gets some paper and a box of crayons. He makes a passable card, but while he is coloring the red, it slips out of his fingers and rolls on the floor. Finn sees it heading towards the fireplace! He leaps towards the crayon, but he’s too late, and it bounces into the fire and melts! Finn gets a look of terror on his face; his valentine won’t be done without some red! He thinks about what to do, and then he gets an idea. He takes a knife and cuts one of his fingers, and gets a few drops of blood out of it. Then he uses that to finish coloring his valentine. He looks at the finished product, and couldn’t be happier! He looks at Jake and says, “Anything else I need?” Jake replies, “A lot of guys seem to give flowers to their valentine, and it seems that roses are the best ones.” Finn walks outside and sees a rose patch, and picks 6 of them and puts them in a bundle. Then he starts walking to Marcy’s house.

As Finn is walking he hears a noise coming from the nearby forest. He looks around and sees nothing, and continues traveling. He keeps going, and then hears the noise again! He draws his sword, the family heirloom forged out of demon blood, and gets into a defensive stance. Suddenly, a deer leaps out of the forest! It jumps at Finn, and he uses the flat side of the blade to deflect the deer’s attack. Then the deer stands and charges! Finn leaps over the deer and puts the blade up against the deer’s neck! The deer looks at him and says, “Hey man, I just wanted to snack on those beautiful roses!” Finn looks at the deer and says, “Sorry, they are spoken for, and I’m taking them to my valentine!” The deer smiles and says, “Oh, they are for your valentine? Sorry about that! That’s a really good use for them!” Finn tells the deer where the rose patch is, and he happily bounds away towards it.

Finn gets to Marcy’s house and knocks on her door. He stands there for a couple of minutes, and then knocks again. No answer. Finn sighs, it seems that his life never gets easy! Then he hears a rushing noise, and feels something behind him. He turns, and it’s Marceline! “BOO!” Finn gets spooked pretty good, but does his best to hide it! He grins and says, “H-hey Marcy, glad to see you are home! She says, “Yeah, I don’t have much choice but to stay at home when the sun is that bright.” She looks at the flowers, and then looks at Finn’s face. He bursts into a huge smile, and says, “Happy Valentine’s day!” Marceline gets a really shocked look on her face! She hadn’t had someone give her a valentine in centuries! “Whoa Finn! What’s this all about?” Finn tells her about the book that Jake found, then says, “Jake said that guys used to give flowers to girls that they like-liked, and I like-like you!” Marceline starts blushing; she doesn’t know what to say! Then Finn reaches into his pack and hands her the card. She looks at the hand drawn card, and can’t believe it! “Finn, you know that Valentine’s Day is a special day for COUPLES. I thought you were dating Flame Princess.” Finn looks at the ground, and says, “She went to the Fire Kingdom to try and make amends with her dad, and it looks like she wants to stay there.” Finn gets a tear in his eye, and Marceline is moved by his sadness. She looks at the card, and then looks at the flowers, and then says, “So what else did Jake tell you?” Finn blushes and says, “He and Lady Rainicorn said they were making out after giving each other gifts, although he did say it wasn’t in the book.” Marceline giggles and kisses Finn on the cheek and says, “We can make out for a little bit, but NO TONGUE!”

Finn and Marceline snuggle together for a few minutes, and do a little smooching, and then Marceline feels that she is getting hungry. She really is having fun, and doesn’t want to get up to go inside. She looks at the card and sees the red on it, and while she is hugging Finn she grabs it and sucks the red out of it. Then she tastes the luscious, rich, full flavor of blood! Her vision goes crazy, and she feels almost uncontrollable desire for Finn! She turns to him and says, “F-Finn, what did you use for the red in this card?” He replies, “The red crayon I was using got melted in the fireplace, so I used a few drops of my blood to finish it.” She says, "Finn, when a vampire tastes blood, their emotions are amplified a lot, based on what they are doing when they taste it.  And, and... we were just making out!"  Finn sees that Marcy sucked the red out of the card, meaning she tasted his blood!  He gets a scared look in his eyes and says, "Wh-What does that mean?"  She grabs him with passion and says, “FORGET THE NO TONGUE RULE!” Then she starts kissing him with her long tongue, and Finn is into it! After a few minutes, they go inside and she floats him to her bedroom and takes off his hat, and gets starry eyed looking at his beautiful golden hair! Marceline says, “Finn, the taste of your blood is making me crazy for you! I would love to go a little past smooching if that’s OK with you…” He nods, and Marceline hisses! They remove each other’s clothes, and get underneath the covers.

A little while later, Finn is lying there looking at the ceiling amazed at what just happened. He says, “Is that tier 15?” Marceline looks at Finn, thinks about it, and then burst out laughing! “Is that what Jake calls it?” Finn nods. She looks at him with real affection in her eyes, and says, “Finn, I’ve always like-liked you, and it was really easy for this to happen. You want to go steady?” Finn says, “More than anything Marcy…” He looks at her and says, “I know that you are a different kind of girl and all, but I really like hanging out with you, and I always have! The ‘radical dame that likes to play games’ is really the one I’ve wanted all along!” They wrap themselves in each other’s arms, and Marceline says, “Happy Valentine’s Day Finn!”

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Just a little story I was inspired to write for the holiday.
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Lsdarkside Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014
that was really nice good job :)
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LadyAdventure13 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
rereading! this is even better a second time.

(hope you are well)
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UltronAkuma Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Epic tier 15!!!! :icongreatjobplz:
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TheShimmerArtist Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
That was so fun to read!
Great job!
I love it so much!

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finciavader Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
te quedo genial
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MarshallLeeA Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2014
i love it!
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psychoblackcat Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Professional General Artist
uu i dinth reed thes story  until now  cute is bary diferent  this style thad you normal use but i liked
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BRUCElee07 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
Well ain't that sweet
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Bleachfan2014 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014

amazing story :)

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NephilimKingMichael Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014
pure epicness, emotion, and love between Finn abd Marcy x3 

and yeah Finn would deffs use his blood if he didn't have red x)
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014

My second favorite Finnceline fan fic I've ever written!  My favorite is because of circumstance.  I wrote a fan fic based on a cartoon done by ProsperingMinds called Right In Front of You.  But she flipped the script hard in part two of her cartoon.  So I was stuck having to reimagine the story completely!  What I ended up with I was very happy with, especially with having to redo the whole plotline!

Right in Front of You glad101.deviantart.com/art/Rig…  cartoon: prosperingminds.deviantart.com…

The Quest (the one that I had to completely redo) glad101.deviantart.com/art/The…  Cartoon: prosperingminds.deviantart.com…

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NephilimKingMichael Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
i know bro thatone of my favorite stories by you too dude x) it was epic, pure epicness
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LadyAdventure13 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow this was amazing!
I like how you made Finn
use his blood. I can totally 
see him doing that! 
Awesome job
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013
Thank you!  That's one of my favorite stories.
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LadyAdventure13 Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are so welcome! I loved it!
So original 
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Tommyp573 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Damn! That was quick for them to get in bed! Nice job!
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013

LOL I just wanted to show how crazy Marceline gets when she drinks the red from blood.  I actually went back & forth about that ending, but I thought it was a cute way to end a valentine's story.

And besides, it worked so well with her line, "FORGET THE NO TONGUE RULE!"

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Tommyp573 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
lol. You did great on it. I like it.
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lunaicarandome Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
OMG THAT WAAAAASS SOOOO MATHEMATICAL!!!!!!!!!!
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013
*BLUSH* Thank you for the compliment!
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lunaicarandome Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
you are SOOOOOOO welcome!!!!!!!! i love your story ( see what i did there? haha I didnt put "i loveD your story" because I still love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
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Ilovepuppys0417 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Artist
Such beauty of a story!! ROMANTIC!!!!
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
Thank you!  It was a lot of fun to write!
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Ilovepuppys0417 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Student Artist
Your welcome
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snoopthedrew Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
I think they do notice the trending older audience with adventure time and that's why it's a very developed show with lot's of plot twists and hidden meanings. Also remember that the main audience for this show when it began was kids in the demographic of about 10-13 years old when it came out in 2010, and I think it would only be natural for a show like this to grow up with the audience. A great example of this is Toy Story which completely highlighted my life as I actually went to college the year TS3 came out, and it really moved me that they noticed that they knew their audience had grown up and they wanted to appeal to everyone at the very end of the saga. I think there probably will be a story arc in the future where Finn is older and the overall mood and lessons of the show could represent an even older growing up experience. Just my opinion on things. Sorry I got so wordy. Hail Finnceline :I haha.
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snoopthedrew Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013
Wow! None of the fanfics I've read really hit the tier 15 topic, and I couldn't healp but just laugh and blush the whole time I read the last paragraph! Excellent job, and thank you very much for contributing to the Finnceline cause!! :D
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Hehe I write a lot about Finnceline, definitely my OTP. This one is a rare one though, as I didn't age Finn first. He's still 15-16 in this fiction. Do you know there are TONS of ways to age someone in a fantasy cartoon? I just wish they would realize that at Frederator Studios!
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musicalangel14 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
hehe cool story :D
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Glad you liked it! Work was very slow on Valentine's day, so I was thinking about what it would be like if the Adventure Time gang found out about the holiday. Then this came to me! Once I got home it only took about an hour to write...
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ImmortalisIncendium Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Great fic! I STILL can't wait for your new Finnceline series with Shelby! It's about time Marce and Finn get a SON.
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Shadowwshade Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Lovely story ^^
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013
Thank you!
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Shadowwshade Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013
You're welcome, Finn x Marceline is one of my favorite pairings :D
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013
I was in such a rush to get this published before the end of the day, that I forgot to mention -- Blood is such a big deal to a vampire, that their emotions are multiplied a LOT(!) when they drink it! If she was fighting when she tasted blood, she would be a more viscious fighter. If she was singing, her emotions would have been expressed greatly in the song. But because she was making out with Finn when she tasted his blood... I'm sure you get the picture! :D
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Glad101 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
OK, it's fixed in the story.
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kevinkas1992 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student Writer
I love you
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